"Road" second draft completed

On-time and everything. Of course, although I posted it to the crit group's files area at 11:59, within 30 minutes I had found two egregious typos I couldn't let stand.

13, 108 words total. I managed to rewrite the climax (not the ending, as I said previously) and find it to be MUCH more satisfying.

Now to start reading what the other folks have posted in prep for Skyping on the 15th...

And hey! Now I have no excuse, and must go write the end I thunk up to "Lost Luggage."